i thought i would contribute a little of my thoughts on it....
i think you have a great base and many of the forms and shapes are great. WIthout getting into all the things that make it work, all i think it really needs to some more attention to the lighting. Hitting some areas with hot spots, accentuating areas of color and light ie. the boosters and lighting. I think it could aslo use some reinforced silohuette value as well.
Cheers for a great peice in the works.
my 2 cents-
Friday, June 8, 2007
This is the current state of the time machine, i call "CW2007" :) anyway the atmosphere is more or less done but i need to add a wet sheen to it, some scale reference, paint schemes, handles and stuff, and various small things. let me know what you guys think.
Posted by clockwork art at 12:36 AM